My Writing

   Hello all, I have a little section of my writing that I would like to share with y'all today.

   Noah looked at me funny. Not funny ha, ha, but funny as in a look I've never seen anyone give me. He leaned forward, put his hands behind my head and pulled me in. I didn't resist and I let a kiss take over me. His lips like silk, his hands strong, yet gentle, his breath—even though they didn't know what brushing teeth was— tasted sweet. His tender touch reassured me of anything that could've happened today, didn't. He was still here by my side, he was still hear with me.

   What do you think. I asked my friend and she liked it but as usual I would like to ask other people. Leave your thoughts in the comments and I'll get back to you later.
     Thanks for reading,
       Nikki